Published on: Mar 4, 2016
Transcripts - Previous Students
WWW- I really like the camera shots displayed
and there is a clear narrative shown within the
opening scene. The lighting was dark which
made the opening more edgy and freaky almost.
The close up shots of the hands and feet have a
really nice effect to them and adds edge to the
EBI- Although i really like this opening, i feel as
though the audio could be improved so you
don’t hear fuzzy audio in the background of the
dialogue. I also feel as though the opening
could have been a little faster and get to the
point a bit quicker.
WWW- I really like the audio in
the beginning of this clip. The
music is clear and the dialogue
is well spoken and crisp. I like
the use of different shot types,
for example the shot in the car
mirror and over the shoulder
shot of the boy walking to the
thugs. The close up of the tools
scraping together creates a
creepy effect that will intrigue
EBI- One of the only things i
didn't like about this opening
was the fact it's a little bit jumpy.
The audio randomly ends
halfway through with the title
being shown, which creates the
idea the clip is finished.
However, it then continues
which i thought was a bit
WWW- The shot types in this clip are really varied. It shows close ups, extreme close ups, establishing shots and many more. The
audio is good and can be heard really well, the dialogue is well pronounced. The clip portrays the storyline well, although i could
see how it could be confusing. The lighting really reflects the mood of the scenes.
EBI- I think the clip shows too much of the story, an opening should be brief but exciting, so i think they could have maybe taken a
more dramatic approach.